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Friday, February 20, 2015

just write: right at the sun.

right at the sun poem

I can’t forget the things you said, 
no matter how I try. 
so I stare right at the sun 
and try my best to fly. 
I can’t forget the way I felt, 
no matter what I do. 
so I stare up at the sky
and hope that I see you. 


  1. You have a serious talent for poetry! So beautiful!

  2. That is beautiful. And I really love how you edited it!

  3. This is such lovely writing. And I couldn't help but peek at the post before this one on your blog, and To All the Boys I Loved Before is an amazing book!! Haha I just saw that. But yeah, this is actually so beautiful. I love your writing almost as much as Jenny Han's.

    I've also nominated you for the Best Blogging Buddies award! Here's the link:

    The Life of Little Me

  4. i love this, it reminds me of the greek myth of Icarus (which happens to be my favorite myth!)

  5. I love this one! A couple of different meanings popped into mind as I read it. :)


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